October 5, 2008
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when you want to hold
your heart's heart
so much that the lock on your chestbursts,
and the squeaky hinges of this doorscream,
you cry with happiness and grief
(and grief, and grief);there is only the earth
and your knees meeting it
in parallel collision
and embrace
and not relief.
© JODI ANDERSON. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.
Comments (7)
I love this. It digs in and twists around with cathartic pain.
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@SuddenlyISee - Thank you, Aja.
Inculcate that grief huh?
I love reading your words, though I know I don't always comment.
i met a river
a constant stream of beauty
swimming in her words
Peace,
Shane
wow,,, this hits me hard...
I am right there, knees meeting ground,
hands in my face....
peace
*~matthew~*
@Stultiloquent - Awesome comment and haiku. Thank you.
@bleuzeus - *hug*
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